Through observe first line chart 中式英语 From the first line chart 也比你这个好
they both steady grew from 12 millions to 20 millions 语法错误
smoothly grew
the UK people like to visit French and Spain very much. 老外不喜欢这样的语法 ，definitly prefer to visit
Obviously the British prefer visited to France than any other country
语法错误 prefer France than any
得分应该可以5.5 ，因为你用了不少插入语，句式还不错，否则只有5分了
词类丰富，未发现拼写错误，同时过渡词和衔接词也很丰富
楼上说的新东方批改网我用过，还可以，你可以试试
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