Thanks for the development of economy ,government’s investment has an increasingly significant role in modern society,. Yet at the same time ,people are divided over whether government be support to invest in more cultural productivities .some people, as a result ,support that the advantage of vest in art place prevail over it is dis advantage .theoretically, it may true, but in reality, I think vest in facilities is more important.
The primary factory we need to take into consideration is that set up more facilities are batter for our bodies. Because we are living in competition age and we have to face a lot of things to solve, such as peer pressure and work pressure .so we may be have some psychological and physical diseases ,its harmful our health .Furthermore, some facilities can help us to excise strong body ,such as swimming pool or play ground. history filled with is example of abraham lincoln , he was a celebrity and well-know in America . In his childhood ,he was keen on sport with his friend and family,such as football. having a strong body is a foundation for my life that have a harmonious family and a successful work.
Additionally, from a society economy .setting up facilities are more money-consuming than art museums , but it is effect is more evidence .moreover , more facilities are suitable for every people including children or senior citizens .on the contrary ,art or museums just suitable for understand people .
I would acknowledge that set up music performance can expend our outlook ,however, when human being s enjoy their life with music or art , is not necessary that they give some consideration to some vest in live in poverty people?
Having considered all the arguments above, in my opinion, both form practical and economy perspectives I think if government use more money in facilities ,the effective will more worth.
随便看了一下，23左右吧，我不是老师，是考过3次，今年要出国的学生，建议只能做参考。结构还行，语句不顺，多多练习，祝早日成功！
哇。你真是雪中送炭。我也写这篇呢。