考英语书面表达写作指导之漫画作文(议论类)
Tasks:
1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons
2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing
3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing
2010年江苏省高考说明：writing
示例1
鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。 它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。 但是, 过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。 请你以鼠标为切入点, 根据下表所提示的信息, 用英语写一篇短文。
注意：
1. 对所给要点逐一陈述, 适当发挥, 要简单翻译纳银。
2. 词数150左右。 开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.
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The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.
示例2
下图描绘的是现在许多家长的苦恼。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下他们可能的做法并发表你的看法。
注意：1. 仔细品味图中文字的幽默、无奈，要适当发挥想象，不要做简单描述。
2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
To most of the parents, it’s no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor.
Difficulties?
1. 读基茄慧图
2. 解意
3. 谋篇
搏答读图
1. 漫画的题目 眼睛
2. 漫画的画面 细节
3. 漫画的文字 观点
4. 漫画的夸张 寓意
解意
1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度 夸奖褒扬 or 批评讽喻？
2. 联系生活，明晰主旨 Imagination!
注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)，切记要认真阅读！！！
谋篇
3 parts:
1) describe the picture
2) interpret its meaning
3) give your opinions about the phenomenon
Part 1 Describe the picture
The picture is talking about/shows…
The picture shows a common phenomenon.
The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.
In the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing…
The picture above is about …
…Let’s look at the picture above/first.
Part 2 Interpret the picture
It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.
The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…
The picture indicates that we…Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that…
This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among…
Part 3 Give your opinions
I think/believe that
As far as I’m concerned,
In my opinion,
From my point of view,
Only in this way can….
Polish up your article!
1. To use linking words if necessary
2. To use complicated structures if possible
1. To use linking words
表示平行、对等或选择关系
and, as well as, together with, not only…but also...
表示转折关系
but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while
表示对比关系
on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand...
表示因果关系
so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to.
表示时间、顺序关系
first, second …, then, next, finally, for one thing ... for another, in the end,
表示递进、强调关系
besides, what’s more, in addition, worse still, above all
表示解释、说明关系
such as, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, and so on
表示结论
in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion
2. To use complicated structures
For most of the parents, it’s no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Let’s look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a computer, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the computer, thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Internet safer for her children---hardware, software and underwear.
It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someone’s underwear, but it describes vividly parents’ distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem. Concerned about their children’s security, some of them just cut off the access to the Internet at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a certain software program to prevent their kids from getting on line –“the software solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Internet -“the underwear solution”!
From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. On one hand, the government should make laws to censor the Internet and block inappropriate sites, making it a safer place for all teenagers. On the other hand, it is better for parents to give their children a proper guide instead of just prevention. Teenagers need to be taught how to tell and resist bad information consciously. Only in this way can the Internet be made safer for the children.
再叮嘱几句：
1. 保证三要素－体裁、时态、人称正确
体裁：议论文
时态：一般现在时
人称：第三人称
2. 避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误
1)误解图意 大忌！
2) 企图幽默 可笑！
3)不明寓意 白写！
4)中心不明 混乱！
3. 控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆）
4. 搞一精辟的结尾！！
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