英语作文五年级《我的假期》，一定要是将来时。要翻译的哦

My plans for this coming summer vacation
Summer vacation is coming.So I really want to make a plan for this coming summer vacation.Well,first,I'll take exercise everyday,so that I can keep healthy.Second,I'm about to improve my English grades,because my English is very poor.Besides,I'm going to look for a part-time job,so that I can have enough money to buy something useful.I'll also relax myself by watching TV for a short time,for I can learn more knowledges from watching TV.In a word,I think my summer vacation will be very meaningful. At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. Then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth. My winter vacation is great. During my vacation, I visited the zoo several times. Two weeks ago my parents took me to the city zoo again. We saw many animals: pandas, tigers, bears, kangaroos, and many zebras. My favorite animal is pandas because they are very cute, and I gave them some apples and rice cakes. They like these food very much. At the bird section, I talked to several parrots. I was surprised they speak English very well. I had a lot of fun for my vacation.

My plans for this coming summer vacation
Summer vacation is coming.So I really want to make a plan for this coming summer vacation.Well,first,I'll take exercise everyday,so that I can keep healthy.Second,I'm about to improve my English grades,because my English is very poor.Besides,I'm going to look for a part-time job,so that I can have enough money to buy something useful.I'll also relax myself by watching TV for a short time,for I can learn more knowledges from watching TV.In a word,I think my summer vacation will be very meaningful.

My winter vacation is great. During my vacation, I visited the zoo several times. Two weeks ago my parents took me to the city zoo again. We saw many animals: pandas, tigers, bears, kangaroos, and many zebras. My favorite animal is pandas because they are very cute, and I gave them some apples and rice cakes. They like these food very much. At the bird section, I talked to several parrots. I was surprised they speak English very well. I had a lot of fun for my vacation.

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或者I’m going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship. I will take a big blue spaceship.

Then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.

At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. Then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.

This is a good holiday on the sun.

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At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. Then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.

楼上的~~他的要求貌似是将来时吧~~你的貌似是过去式~~~