那位英文高手帮小弟翻译一下这篇文章？（加急！！！）

one night,Xiangniang held behind the door and looking slinkingly(偷偷地）。After a while,she suddenly saw that the sky shined and a piece of bright cloud droped from the sky.As soon as it fell on the ground,it changed to an handsome young man.The man picked up the tea box and gone.
He went to the mount and filled the box with tea after a short time.
Xiangniang felt very happy and she ran to the man.She held the man's hand and said:'thank you very much.'The man turned back and he noticed that it's Xiangniang.He said with a smile;‘I can't fly if you hole my hand like this.'Xiangniang said:'Please tell me who you are?'
The man didn't said anything but smiled again.He tried to let Xiangniang take her hand back but xiangniang held him so hard that he can't do anything.Fainlly,he said:'I noticed that you are so hard to picks tea everyday .So I come from the shy to help you.Now you find me.So I can't help you any longer.Please always be hardword.'After he said that ,the man went away and didn't look back wheather how she called him.

我认为该这么翻译。第一位的翻译我认真地看了。不明白为什么把香娘翻译的那么复杂。但只要有一些翻译有些直。我认为一些句子的断句与顺次由于中英的不同应予以改变。所以就在此班门弄斧一下了~~~~自认为还不错。
顺便问一下，那个年轻人的性别，文章中怎么一会男一会女
还有，这是帮人解答疑难的。不要为了积分，就抄袭别人的。那会显得你很#￥%。

One night, incense mother hiding behind doors, away watching. He suddenly saw a bright sky, a black cloud from the sky to fly down, one to the ground, it becomes a beautiful young people, the young people take up tea boxes left. By tea, he would take a basket full of tea. Incense mother met with great pleasure, she ran past, the young people a real hand and said : "Thank you! Thank you! "That individual looked back as incense mother, Qi said :" You held my hand, I would not fly together. "incense Niangshuo :" Tell me, are you? " That person did not answer, but also surprised, to try to pull incense your hand. But Hong Kong has too restrictive a mother, she can also pull not create, he had said : "I see you one day so difficult to pick tea, so run down from the sky to help you. Now that you have seen through my identity, I can not help you adopt, in the future, we will continue your efforts! "finish on the fly away. No incense mother how she also of no avail.

On night, incense mother hiding behind doors, away watching. He suddenly saw a bright sky, a black cloud from the sky to fly down, one to the ground, it becomes a beautiful young people, the young people take up tea boxes left. By tea, he would take a basket full of tea. Incense mother met with great pleasure, she ran past, the young people a real hand and said : "Thank you! Thank you! "That individual looked back as incense mother, Qi said :" You held my hand, I would not fly together. "incense Niangshuo :" Tell me, are you? " That person did not answer, but also surprised, to try to pull incense your hand. But Hong Kong has too restrictive a mother, she can also pull not create, he had said : "I see you one day so difficult to pick tea, so run down from the sky to help you. Now that you have seen through my identity, I can not help you adopt, in the future, we will continue your efforts! "finish on the fly away. No incense mother how she also of no avail.

老大，不是on，是at或one

On night, incense mother hiding behind doors, away watching. He suddenly saw a bright sky, a black cloud from the sky to fly down, one to the ground, it becomes a beautiful young people, the young people take up tea boxes left. By tea, he would take a basket full of tea. Incense mother met with great pleasure, she ran past, the young people a real hand and said : "Thank you! Thank you! "That individual looked back as incense mother, Qi said :" You held my hand, I would not fly together. "incense Niangshuo :" Tell me, are you? " That person did not answer, but also surprised, to try to pull incense your hand. But Hong Kong has too restrictive a mother, she can also pull not create, he had said : "I see you one day so difficult to pick tea, so run down from the sky to help you. Now that you have seen through my identity, I can not help you adopt, in the future, we will continue your efforts! "finish on the fly away. No incense mother how she also of no avail.