请帮我修改一下英语作文，谢谢，错误希望可以明确指出

2024-11-23 01:18:50

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回答（1）：

the man with confusing and astonishing, who is a rock singer in the right side of the picture, yet in the left side of the picture, the loser earning his life by imitating the singer star.

1.confused and astonished这句话表达的不是太明确，感觉是作者astonished 2.imitate 是及物动词后可直接跟名词.
整体写的不错，用的状语修饰的很好。

回答（2）：

这个句子是不是没有谓语部分？
我的建议是, On the right side of the picture is a rock star looking confused and astonished. On the other side is a loser earning his life by imitating the rock star.

回答（3）：

The man, confused and astonished, is a rock star in the right side of the picture, while in the left side is a 通屌丝who earn his life by imitating the star.

回答（4）：

还行

回答（5）：

请帮我修改一下英语作文 ，谢谢，错误希望可以明确指出

请帮我修改一下英语作文，谢谢，错误希望可以明确指出