注意,商务信函是有严格格式的!!!
Dear sir/ madam,
I have browsed your company's website and became quite interested in your products.
I'd like to learn more about your products. I'm in Shanghai, China. If your company has an office here, I would be very grateful if you can send me the address.
I am wondering whether I have the honor to be the exclusive agent of your sales in Shanghai.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
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满意请采纳,谢谢!
Hi,
After seeing your company's products on the internet, I became interested. I would like to get more information about them. I am in Shanghai, China. Does your company have any offices nearby so that I can inquire in person?I hope to be your authorized dealer in Shanghai.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
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inquire 是 咨询, in person就是亲自去的意思。 authorized dealer就是受权代理商
i read about the introduction of your products, i am really interested in them. i like to negotiate with you about the authority of agency in shanghai.
i will be appreciatied if you could send me some more details about the products.
i am living in shanhai, and like to seek some advice from your local office, if is any. could you e mail me the full address , please.
looking forward to your patient reply. thank you.
如果大家帮你写了一篇好文章,万一对方又回复过来,你又要怎么办呢?
Hello.
On the Internet you see product introduction, the product of your company is interested in.
Hope to be able to understand. I am in the Chinese city of Shanghai, if there are offices will be able to send a specific address, I can be the last advisory. Hope to Deputy your company's products in the Shanghai area of sales right.
Hope to be able to reply。
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