以“My trip”为题、写一篇初一英语作文 60词左右！！

I went on a trip to Hainan with my family on during the holiday.We went there by plane. After we got off the plane, we went to the beach to see the beautiful sand and swim there. There were other people there too. Some people were surfing and some people were diving in the deeper part of the sea. Afterwards we had lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach. We ate seafood like shrimps and craps, and drank some abalone soup.We all didn't want to go home because the scenery was so beautiful, and there were so many other exciting things to try,but sadly it was time for us to go. It was definitely an exciting trip.If I have a chance to go there again, i will be more than happy to visit the place again.

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Last week, we went to GuiLin by train and we stayed there for five days. It was such a wonderful trip that I wanted to stay there longer. The green hills, clear water and strange caves all left a deep impression on me. What`s more, Guilin rice noodles,the speciality there, was very delicious. To me, it was really a unforgettable trip.