英语达人请近来帮我翻译一下 非常简单

尛月啊有错
堂表兄弟姐妹不能用brothers之类的
那是指亲生的
而应该用cousins
而且定语从句that 后面的make应该是三单makes因为主语country是单数

英琛 第四排的that后面多了个it.
我的翻译:
I am glad to hear from you.My name is ...,and I am a ...-year-old Chinese girl.My parents just have one kid,and that's me.But I have lots of cousins.I like playing badminton as you,but I think I couldn't play as well as you.I like Japanese cartoons very much,and I am dreaming of the romantic countries which makes the beautiful pictures.I am studying Japanese now,so please help me to learn it.Do you know that your name in Chinese is read as"LinmuXiazi"?It's a very beautiful name.i believe that you are a beauteous girl as beautiful as your name.I hope that we could meet you in China soon,we must be good friends!

I am glad to receive your letter,My name is ..I am ..years old and I am from China.I am the only kid,But I have many brothers and sisters.I also like playing madmiton as you.But I cannot beat you.I like cartoons that is form Janpan,I am dreaming of the romantic countries that make the beautiful pics .I am trying learing Japan,so I will trouble you giving me some advise .Do you know?your name can be called DuMUxiazi,it's a very beautiful name .I believe you are a girl whose name is the same as mine.I wishI can come to China and visit you someday,We can be good friends.

I'm glad to recive your letter .I'm an Chinese girl named XXX. My parents have one child,me.But I have many cousinry.I also like playing badminton,but I think my technic isn't as well as yours.I like Japonic cartoons very much and I yearn this country which has beautiful pictures.I'm trying to learn Japanese,so I wish you can teach me.Do you know?Your name in Chinese is \\\,that it's a very beautiful name.I believe you are a beautiful girl like your name.I wish I can see you in China soon,and we will be very good friends(纯属于自己翻译，错了不怪我，不过应该没有太大的语法错误吧！）