高分!急求英文翻译! 用英文翻译下面一段自我介绍

由于参加过不少英文面试，所以根据我的理解对你的自我介绍做了一些调整(比如年龄和家庭情况是不用提及的)，如果你觉得不太满意的话可以通过追问继续和我沟通。
Hello, I'm XXX. I am very glad to be here for this interview. Thank you very much for this opportunity. I have been working two years since graduation.In the last two years, I have gained much about work and life, such as prudent working attitude, the importance of team work（团队精神一定要有啊） and how to better communicate with colleagues and friends. I have learnt electronic knowledge in college, I think it is my advantage. Besides, I am willing to work overtime and shoulder more responsibilities. I believe I am a suitable candidate for this job. In my spare time, I'd like to read books, watch movies, play football games(踢足球可表现身体素质好，能经受大负荷工作), and chat with friends. Thank you.

Hello, my name is XXX, 23 years old, college degree, major in from the jiangxi province, in the home have father, mother, brother, sister. Very pleased to be able to come to your company for an interview. I work for two years, two years working time let me learn a lot of, have work also have in life, such as: seriously, careful work attitude, and friendly attitude to life. I cherish these experience. At school I study electronic the knowledge of the respect, I also can endure hardships, I think I can competent for this job. I like reading books, the Internet, movies, the football match, chat with friends, these are my life part of power.

Hello, my name is xxx,23 years old, college degree, from Jiangxi province, with dad at home, mother, brother, sister. Very glad to come to your company for an interview. I have worked for two years, two years of work time let me learn a lot, also on a life of work, such as : careful, careful work attitude, and people - friendly attitude to life. I value these experiences. At school I studied electronic knowledge, I am able to endure hardship, I think I can handle this job. Usually I like reading books, Internet, cinema, football game, chat with friends, which is the dynamic part of my life.
您好,我叫xxx,23岁,大专学历,来自江西省,家中有爸,妈,哥哥,姐. 很高兴能来到贵公司面试. 我工作两年了,两年工作时间让我学到很多,有工作上的也有生活上的,比如:认真,仔细的工作态度,以及对人友好生活态度. 我很珍惜这些经验. 在学校时我也学习过电子方面的知识,我也能吃苦,我觉得我可以胜任这份工作. 平时我喜欢看书,上网,看电影,足球比赛,和朋友聊天,这些是我生活动力的一部分.

Hellow, my name's xxx, from Jiangxi Province. I'm 23, graduated from college. I have my parents, a brother and a sister in my family. I'm greatly honored to be here to be interviewed today. I've worked for 2 years, during which I learned quite a lot of things, both in my work and at home. For example, persistence, true attitude towards my job, and a view of life for being nice to people. I do value these experiences. Back in my college days, I learned about electronics. And I find myself quite a tough guy, proviably qualified for this job.
As for my hobbies, I usually enjoy reading books, googling, watching movies and soccer games, and chating as well, which, I believe, are parts of my power for a better life.