看看我写的错没错 有没有语法错误 帮我改一下

2024-11-15 16:40:10
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in the morning Luo ten got up.She felt late, so she did not have breakfast. After riding a bicycle in a hurry to go to school,she found that school did not open the door.Suddenly remembering today is Sunday, she returned home and happened to find her friend waiting for her, so she chated with her friends for a few minutes. During the noon, she ate lunch with her grandparents, and then watched TV in the afternoon.After doing these things, she slept at ten o'clock at night.
这是我根据自己的意思修改的。看得出你很想用分词,但是,差不多都用错了。加油吧。