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Online Shopping

Today, with the rapid development in electronic commerce, business are attempting to gain great popularity by using online shopping to interact with customers. According to Jack Ma, founder and CEO of Alibaba Group, Alibaba.com serves more than 70 million members from more than 250 countries and territories.

In fact, both online shopping and traditional shopping have some advantages and disadvantages. To begin with, online shopping is very convenient for shopping and allows for a vast selection of goods to be at your fingertips. You don't have to worry about the crowds in the mall, finding for a parking spot, and stuck in a traffic jam. Besides, with the online tools that enable goods comparison, you can compare prices and qualities to make a better decision with less effort. However, though online shopping is 24/7 available, a recent study has found that privacy was still the top concern of people while security ranked bottom. Furthermore, people are worried that the goods won't be what they have expected by viewing online. It would be inconvenient if the size or colour didn't fit, the consumers had to return it. Some goods are not returnable. Some are used or damaged when they are shipped.

In conclusion, although there are advantages of online shopping, there also some negative concern of online shopping. Sellers need to make improvements of the online shops with consideration on consumers perspective. By doing so, online shopping will gain popularity among people and will become widely to benefit sellers, buyers, and society.

Nowadays with the ever rapid development and increasingpopularity of the information technology ， shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youngsters.

Online shopping has made our daily life more convenient and comfortable. For example ， shopping on the internet can save students a great deal of time on the way between home and store， so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on theiracademic work. The internet has shorten the distance between manufacturers and consumers and thus we can even buy goods in other countries .On the other hand ， lack of the face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. What’ s more the delivery will increase the risk of items’ damage.

In my opinion， shopping on the internet is a irreversible trend. More and more people will be accustomed to it. It will be much more popular in the near future. And at the same time we should take some measures to make it perfect.

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