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Today,I want to say some feeling of Beijing.I had been to Beijing for three times last year,stay there for about 5 month totally.I studyed in Xindongfang,it's looks like I'm a resident there.
The first things impress me is the traffic,when I got there for the first time,I take a lot of luggages,arrived time was 4 in the morning,I had my breakfast after I got off the train then brought a map,I take Taxi for convenience.10 yuan for start,3 kilometers away 1 yuan for each 100 meters.... When I got there,it already cost me 60 yuan.then I think I am the people who should take the bus.
so most of time when I am in Beijing I take bus,the bus always crowded,if you take the bus in rush hour,I 'm sure you feet can't touch the floor and you have to give the money to the busman who shouting" we have arrive Gongzhufen" through the crack between passengers,it's really a strange experience.When I was back，I found a paradise in our bus.
Maybe the temple is not so interesting for the young people,so you will not visit it.If you like music,you can go to Haidian park in july,there is MIDI and rock music waiting for ya,If you like sports,you can visit Beijing next year for Olimpic games,be ready for get lost in the crowded,If you like shopping ,you can visit Wangfujing street,like IT product--Zhongguancun,you can get what your want for sure.The one who like culture can visite Sanlitun,of course you must a rich man..From other aspect,some traditional place is necessary,like Forbiden city,TianANmen square,especially the ceremony of rise national flag is must-see,but to me,there is a place worth to visit,because I may get the visa in November，so I want to visit Xiangshan before I go.I don't suggest you visit Xiangshan,I thing nobody can sum up the whole Beijing,but via my words,I hope you can know Beijing more.

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