如何在短时间内提高英语写作水平?

2025-04-06 13:54:58
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回答(1):

中考已经进入了最后的冲刺阶段,同学们个个整装待发,准备就绪。同时,也有很多同学十分迷茫,十分纠结。因为他们不知道如何才能够提高英语的写作部分,亦或是如何才可以取得高分? 其实,中考英语写作是很容易提高的,因此,同学们大可不必慌张,害怕。那么如何才可以在短时间内提高自己的写作水平呢?今天我们就从三点谈起。 第一点是遣词的原则: 1、 同学们一定要尽量使用高等词汇及短语,如果仅仅记住几个简单基础的词汇,而且一味的重复低水平的英语知识点,远远达不到要求。同时,也会给阅卷老师造成视觉疲劳,所以一定要“新颖”来抓住老师的眼球,只有这样,你的作文才能得到高分。比如: 最近深受同学们喜欢的畅销小说慕光之城中的男主角爱德华先生是那么的帅气,他冷峻的外表下藏着一颗炽热的心,也就是这一点让亿万女生为止动容。当我们想表达这个小伙儿十分帅气时,可能首先想到的是handsome, cool and good looking这三个词,但是,在你使用这三个词的同时,其他的同学也会使用,这样一来千篇一律,没有任何创意,这几个词汇也显得特别的乏味,判卷老师自然也不会对你的作文有任何印象,更不用想要得高分了。因此,在这个时刻,我们一定要用一些高级词汇,比如:attractive, charming等等,如果你非要用以上三个单词,完全可以加上一些等同于very的形容词加以修饰,比如:incredible handsome, extremely cool等等。再比如:我们在描述一个景点的时候,同学们首先想到的形容词是great, wonderful, amazing and interesting等词汇。这些词汇没有任何创新,因此,如果你用以下词汇,效果肯定会完全不同,例如:fantastic, fabulous, marvelous, extraordinary, remarkable等词。不但使判卷老师印象深刻,还可以归为高分那个层次,何乐而不为呢? 2、 在使用高等词汇及短语的同时不要忘记使用俗词中的不俗意。比如:在09年重庆中考满分作文中写道这样一句话:I‘m afraid the food in the new school won’t agree with me. 初看这句话似乎存在语法错误,怎么可以食物不同意我呢?其实不然,这是美国的一句俚语,意思是食物不合胃口。再来看看08年湖北省荆州市中考写作,以My Hometown 为主题写篇作文,其中一篇满分作文中写道I was born in a beautiful city with a rich culture. People in the town are hard-working though they are having a richer and better life. 在同一篇文章中用到了同样的词语rich但却是不同意,一个表达了丰富的文化,另一个则表示过着富裕的生活。这样巧妙的使用词语,怎能不让老师给满分或是高分呢? 要想达到以上的写作水平就要求同学们在平时的训练中,有意识的强化“复杂,高级”这两个概念,使自己的作文能区别于普通的作文,使自己一下子就站在一个比较高的位置上,充分显示自己的实力。平时学习过程中就要注意总结各种各样的词汇,储备起来以备用。 第二点是造句的原则: 句子是表达一个完整意思的最小单位,所以造句能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。好的英语句子能够生动,形象,准确的表达内容。所以要想写出漂亮的书面表达,必须从写好句子开始。如何才能写出好句子来呢?我们首先可以从山寨开始。比如轩尼诗XO有句广告语非常优美,它是这样说的:To me, the past was black and white,but the future is always colorful.再比如,我们众所周知两句话Nothing is impossible!和 Anything is possible!有很多同学在自己的作文中写过这两句话,但是太俗套了,现在又出现了另一句来自佳能广告中广告语Impossible made possible.如果可以在自己的作文中用上这句话,那一定是酷毙了,帅呆了! 当然,我们不可以总是山寨,因此,可以借用一些句子,稍加修饰后变为自己的。比如:A diamond lasts forever. 钻石恒久远,一颗永流传。这是非常经典的一句话,但是离我们的生活有些远且作文中用到的几率比较小,不过我们可以稍加修饰就可以使用在自己的作文中了。比如:Friendship lasts forever. Maternal love lasts forever. The teachers‘ love lasts forever. 不但老师看着开心,分数自然也就上去了。 第三点是谋篇的原则: 优秀的作文都有个共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。文章的连贯性和紧凑感是很重要的。句子作为最小的表达意思的语言单位,如果只是被随意的整合,是无法达到有效表达的目的。 下面是总结出来的经典的十大连词,以及他们的替换用法,这样大家写作和阅读的时候,就可以用得更加多选择啦! 十大关系代词替换 一、And 并列关系(and) in addition / and / similarly / likewise / as well as / besides / furthermore / also / moreover / too / not only ……but / even / besides this/that 二、Sequence 顺序 (then)出现的时候表示列举 first / initially / second etc/ to begin with / then / next / earlier/later / following this/that / afterwards 三、Consequence 结果 (so)前面是后面的结果 / 也就是这些词后面就开始给出结论了。as a result / thus / so / therefore / consequently / it follows that / thereby / eventually / in that case / admittedly 四、Contrast转折 (but)表对前面论述的转折 / 一般后面才是作者观点however / on the other hand / despite / in spite of /though / although / but / on the contrary/ yet / instead of / rather / whereas / nonetheless / in contrast 重庆市2009年初中毕业暨高中招生考试中的作文题,一篇满分作文写道:I am super excited. On the other hand, I am a little bit nervous because I am afraid of facing problems at new school. 作者用On the other hand表示转折,我很激动,但是还是有些紧张,因为……两个转折词的应用使得句子间的连接恰到好处,十分连贯。 五、Certainty 确定 (of course)强烈的确定 / 后面是作者的坚定论点 obviously / certainly / plainly / of course / undoubtedly 六、Condition 条件/ 因为 (if )后面跟随着某种情况发生的前提或者是条件。if / unless / whether / provided that / Given that / for / so that / whether / depending on 七、Time 时间 (when )before / since / as / until / meanwhile / at the moment / when / whenever / as soon as / just as 八、Summary 总结 (in a word)作者的最后总结in conclusion / in summary / lastly / finally / to sum up / to conclude / to recapitulate 重述 / in short / in a word 08年北京中考题中一篇满分作文在文章的结尾处写道:In a word, we can learn a lot form this little hero. 作者用In a word概括全篇文章,显得简洁,概括并且具体。 九、Example举例 (for example)for example / for instance / just as / in particular / such as / namely 来看看2009年北京中考作文中的一篇满分作文这样写道:I often help my parents do housework, such as, washing clothes, cleaning the room and watering flowers. 笔者用了such as进行举例,补充说明帮助父母做家务的种类,显得十分详细。 十、Reason原因 ( because)since / as / so / because (of) / due to / owing to / the reason why / in other words / leads to / cause 我们来看这样一个例子,在2007年中考满分作文中,有个同学这样写道:But I don’t think what you do is right since you are a student. 他自如的运用了but 和since这两个连词,使整句话变得非常连贯。 最后,希望同学们在平时的训练中多积累语言素材、多做翻译练习、多做阅读练习。 在中考中取得理想的成绩!

回答(2):

记住一些英语模板,尤其是议论文,这是最最实用的。

若要长期,就是通过自己坚持写、看一些好文章。

回答(3):

背关键的句型,词组,连接词,可以让文章看起来很流畅。分数也会提高。另外可以看不同类型的文章,学一些经典句型,如新概念英语。

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