英语作文,五年级我的旅游计划,不少于6句话并翻译

作文如下：

I am planing to travel to Suzhou a city called Eastern Venice.I wan to see the beautiful rivers with different kinds of bridges across it .Then most attracting scene is the Lining Park .

我计划去苏州，一个叫东方威尼斯的城市。我想去看看美丽的河流，河上有各种各样的桥。然后最吸引人的风景就是林荫公园。

I will be excited once I hear the name .The beautiful and ancient house with the green trees arounded will make the visit very comfortable .The other reason of my choosing Suzhou as my travel place is that it is quite close to my place .

一旦我听到这个名字，我会很兴奋。这座美丽而古老的房子周围绿树环绕，会让我的旅行非常舒适。我选择苏州作为我的旅行地点的另一个原因是它离我的地方很近。

I can save a lot money while enjoy my fabulous life .To make a short trip to Suzhou would not make me tired and I can also enjoy the life .Why not go there？

我可以在享受美好生活的同时省下很多钱。到苏州短途旅行不会让我感到累，我也可以享受生活。为什么不去那里呢？

　　I am planing to travel to Suzhou a city called Eastern Venice.I wan to see the beautiful rivers with different kinds of bridges across it .Then most attracting scene is the Lining Park .I will be excited once I hear the name .The beautiful and ancient house with the green trees arounded will make the visit very comfortable .The other reason of my choosing Suzhou as my travel place is that it is quite close to my place .I can save a lot money while enjoy my fabulous life .To make a short trip to Suzhou would not make me tired and I can also enjoy the life .Why not go there ?

不知道~~~求大神