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我去过北京八次以上。北京是中国的首都。这是一个大城市。我对北京非常熟悉。从南通到北京乘飞机需要1小时40分钟。北京有许多高楼大厦。
这是一个现代化的城市。我的家人参观了长城,颐和园,故宫博物馆,北海公园,太空博物馆等。我去了北京的农村划船和钓鱼。非常有趣。
我去王府井购物了。我买了很多纪念品和其他东西。我喜欢吃北京小吃。他们是美味的。不要错过北京烤鸭。它真的很好。
I went to Beijing more than eight times. Beijing is the capital of China. It’s a big city. I am very familiar with Beijing.
It takes an hour and forty minutes from Nantong to Beijing by plane. There are many tall buildings in Beijing. It’s a modern city.
My family visited the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum, the Beihai Park, the Space Museum, etc. I went to the countryside of Beijing to go boating and fishing.
It was very interesting. I went shopping in WangFuJing. I bought lots of souvenirs and other things. I like eating Beijing snacks. They are delicious. Don’t miss the Beijing Duck. It is really nice.
Summer travel to Beijing
This summer holiday I have been to BeiJing for a travel. it was a great journey! we have went to see the Imperial Palace and the great wall and them let me feel that I was proud to be a Chinese.
The Imperial Palace noted the history. there were many antiques which we could espy the great culture .
From the great wall,it was a well-known wonder in the world.it is made of big stones which was too heavy to bring even uesing it to buil a construction of ruggedization. what a great grandeur!
Beijing is the capital of China,I,once went to Bei Jing