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帮忙改一下这篇作文，错的地方改过来，然后词数改到80词左右，please！

2024-11-02 16:30:16

推荐回答（2个）

回答（1）：

你的句子语法都正确，且词数已达60多点。只要稍微添加一些连词和短语即可达到80词。

回答（2）：

I usually get up at 6:15 in the morning. then I do morning exercises in the playground. At 6:40, I have my breakfast. You can see many students and teachers in the dinning room. After breakfast, I often read English with my classmates.examda
　　We have six classes every day. the first class begins at 7:50 am. I like all the classes, because my teachers can make the classes lively and interesting. My favorite subject is English, so I join English Corner every week.