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1. they don't get diverted
2. they don't get diverted by enticements
3. they don't get diverted by enticements if they are responsible for deploying the cash (were they responsible是虚拟语气。因为没有用If,所以were提前,并且句子倒装。)
4. (...), they don't get diverted by enticements(...) if they are responsible for deploying the cash(...)
翻译过来大意如下:在将(其)给我们的同时,他们的注意力,如果让他们来负责利用企业释放出的现金的话,并不会因为各种各样扑面而来的诱惑而转移。
尤其是,当他们负责使一单交易中的本金的利用率最大化时,他们就将眼前形形色色的诱惑转给我们,以避免被分散注意力,。
你这句话有问题,漏了标点符号,应该不是原句,句子是错句