My favourite sport
My favourite sport is basketball. It is a very popular game in many countries,and both children and adults can play it. We can play it indoors or outdoors. It is much funnier than walking . And it’s also easier than skiing. It is good for our health. So now many Chinese people like to play basketball in their free time . My favourite player is Yao Ming. He plays basketball wonderfully. I hope I can play basketball as well as him.
试题分析键旅春:这是一篇提纲作文。主要写作者动员运动的原因,全文主要用一般现在时。稿耐
【亮点说明】镇灶文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,例如 both... and, indoors or outdoors, in their free time , as well as; 比较级如 much funnier than,easier than;宾语从句 I can play basketball as well as him.以及固定句型如It is good for our health.文章层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。