英语作文myfriendchanges带翻译

写作思路：先对朋友做简单介绍，然后表明他的个性特征以及带来的改变，最后总结。

示例如下：

I  have  a  nice  friend.  Who  is  it?  Is  it  a  boy  or  a  girl?  Guess!  Yes,  you  are  right.  My  friend  is  an  eleven-year-old  girl.  Her  name  is  Ma  Ruochen. 

At  school,  She  studies  Chinese, Maths, English  and  other  subjects.  She  is  good  at  Chinese,  and  she  wants  to  be  a  writer.  Last  year, she  got  a  prize  in  the composition  contest.

She  likes  not  only  studying,  but  also  drawing.  She  always  has  drawing  lessons  at  weekends.  She  likes  listening  to  music  too.

Everyone  thinks  she  is  friendly,  helpful,  polite  and  very  humorous.  She  always  wears  a  smile  on  her  face  and  looks  happy.

As  good  friends, We  often  play  together.  She  always  helps  me  with  Maths  when  I  have  difficulty  in  it.

My  friend  is  very  great.  Do  you  think  so?

【翻译】

我有一个好朋友。是谁呀？是男孩还是女孩？猜测！是的，你是对的。我的朋友是一个十一岁的女孩。她的名字叫马若辰。 

她在学校学习中文，数学，英语和其他科目。她擅长中文，想当作家。去年，她在作曲比赛中获奖。

她不仅喜欢学习，而且喜欢绘画。她总是在周末上绘画课。她也喜欢听音乐。

每个人都认为她友好，乐于助人，有礼貌并且非常幽默。她总是脸上挂着微笑，看起来很开心。

作为好朋友，我们经常一起玩。当我在数学方面遇到困难时，她总是会帮助我。

我的朋友很好。你这样认为吗？

写作思路：从好朋友的故事写作，写他的从前，写他的现在，发生的改变。

Tom is my intimate friend. He is a good boy, However, he has a bad hobby that he was addicted in computer game. Recently, he has a significant change that he spends much time on study, so I’m wondering about the reason leads to his change. He told me that his father have a serious conversation with him recently at home. 

His father was very concerned about his study because he spent too much time on computer game. He told Tom he is a big boy and should be responsible for his study. Tom told me his father is an easy going man and Tom never saw him being so angry. So Tom realizes that he really hurt his father. So he wants to change and will never touch computer game before getting a good mark on study. I believe Tom can keep his promise and becomes a responsible man.

汤姆是我的好朋友。他是个好孩子，但是他有一个坏嗜好，就是沉迷于电脑游戏。最近，他有一个重大的变化，他花了很多时间在学习上，所以我想知道他改变的原因。他告诉我，他父亲最近在家里和他进行了一次严肃的谈话。

他父亲非常关心他的学习，因为他在电脑游戏上花了太多时间。他告诉汤姆他是个大男孩，应该对他的学习负责。汤姆告诉我他父亲是个随和的人，汤姆从没见过他这么生气。所以汤姆意识到他真的伤害了他的父亲。所以他想改变，在取得好成绩之前决不碰电脑游戏。我相信汤姆能信守诺言，成为一个负责任的人。