雅思作文批改求高手点评最好还能给个分

2024-11-27 15:05:40

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回答（1）：

5.5~6分此文章比较中规中矩，模板痕迹不重，高分词汇短语不多
dangerouses->dangerousness,
also will->will also， yoth->youth
choise->choice
there be的单复数根据后面的名词决定这点在文章中多次用错
worth这个词的用法要搞清才可以用文章中多次用错
first, the disadvantages。这句话过于口语化写作需要完整的句子
too many examples are there应改成there are too many examples 这个新东方老师特意强调过
举对成人的缺点时应用现在时而不用过去时

建议：你已掌握基本的写作技巧，但基础薄弱，最好巩固一下单词和语法
附：worth, worthy, worthwhile 区别
1.worth adj&n.值得，应该,作形容词在句中只能作表语
①sb./sth. be worth ... :
His words are worth notice.他的话值得注意.
The bike is worth 200 yuan.
②be (well) worth doing (很)值得做...,注意这个句型是主动表被动的用法,如这本书值得一读
This book is worth reading.
2.worthy adj&n.有价值的,值得...的,做形容词时既可以做表语又可以作定语
①be worthy of +n.
He is worthy of our praise.
②be (quite)worthy of being done (很)值得做... :
The film is worhty of being watched.
③be worthy to be done (很)值得做... ,上面的句子可以改写为:
The film is worthy to be watched.
3.worthwhile adj.值得做的..值得出力的,既可以做表语又可以作定语
be worthwhile doing/be worthwhile to do:
It is worthwhile discussing the question again.=It is worthwhile to discuss the question again.

回答（2）：

您好，您的作文有待提高。文章段落分明，观点很明确，语法错误和拼写错误频繁出现，并且在连接文章句子的时候遇到困难，能够使用一定量的词汇，但是出现用此不当的地方很多。

整体分数5.5

附上一个范文请过目，仔细看看连接词，单复数，和结构的使用。

Some people believe that attending a college or university in a foreign country has many advantages. They think that attending a college or university abroad can help them learn more than they can from universities in their own country, especially when they go to a developed country where they can catch up with the pace of scientific and technical advance of the world from that country' s modern lab facilities. In addition, they can pick up the latest developments of the living language there more quickly, develop their ability of coping with the routine matters such as finding a part-time job, renting a house and helping with the house work, and learn many new things to widen their views and broaden their minds.

But some people don't agree to it. They think that attending a college or university in foreign country also has many disadvantages and the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. They hold that students studying in a foreign country will have more difficulties in both life and study. The most serious problem is the language barriers. They have to spend much time learning a foreign language and even if they have learned the language, they still can' t understand thoroughly what the foreigners and teachers say just because of the unfamiliar culture background and social customs. So ff they are not persons full of courage, flexibility, and determination, they are most likely to fail and learn nothing eventually. Besides, since costs and expenditure are much higher than those in their native country, most overseas students have to work for a living, and will find it impossible for them to pay all attention to studying. So it is of benefit to them if they study in their own country.

The above two viewpoints, I should say, are all reasonable in some respects. But I support the first kind of people. I think people should attend a college or university in a foreign country ff they can. In this way they can learn not only the useful knowledge of science but also the culture and Customs of other nations.

Besides, they can learn some new ideas and, when they come back, bring in some fresh air in our way of thinking and promote the development of our country. If nobody went to study abroad because of the disadvantages, the development of our country would be slower.

回答（3）：

语法错误啊~~一个一个改起来太麻烦了，我给你个方法，你把这个复制到word里面去，然后用拼写检查看一下，这篇文章最高6

回答（4）：

语法错误啊

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雅思作文批改 求高手点评 最好还能给个分

雅思作文批改求高手点评最好还能给个分