I want to be a grest Chinese soldier.(我想成为一名优秀的中国将士。)
军人: military ; armyman ; serviceman 都行,还有很多种呢!
I want to be a perfect Chinese soldier.
I want to be an excellent PLA soldier.
I want to be an excellent Chinese soldier
仅供参考:
I am willing to become an excellent PLA soldier.
willing to 表示自愿成为,这样会更显主动,而非被动.
excellent 意为极其优秀的,这样符合原句的句意.